The final thlog :( #10

Well guys this is my last thlog :(. It was one hell of a ride, a stressful one at that. Last week i focused on just finishing my portfolio. It was hectic especially since I had to make a new thesis for both WP1 and WP2. The revision matrices and reverse outlines weren't that hard since I already knew what major changes I did and the main idea of each of my paragraphs. What really took me a while was the meta-cognitive reflection. I had an idea of what I wanted to do but I really didn't know how to phrase it somewhat academically. There was some points where my normal tone slipped in mostly because I wanted to reflect what I was thinking. However, I can say I am satisfied with it. I'm very satisfied with my revised WP's because they actually have arguments now. Another change is that i shortened my WP1 by three pages. That was very stressful to somehow keep the information that was in those pages and make my paper only five pages long. Now to end my last thlog. Zack thanks for everything man. You helped change me improve my writing greatly. Before, I used to fill my papers with fluff and more fluff. Now I just get right to the point and tell the reader what I want them to know. I'm also much more confident in my writing than before. I used to stress about fitting everything inside my paper at the cost of it being really long and tedious. Now I know how to pick out the main points of articles and elaborate on it.