“Variation in the
tail length of non-avian dinosaurs” and “Investigation of Expert Systems”; both
look similar don’t they? A few words to summarize these titles: long, boring,
and uninteresting. These are the thoughts of most when they first read titles
like these and they can assume that the genre they belong too is also boring. However,
similarities can only go so far before dissimilarities begin to surface. While
both of the pieces have similar titles and seem to belong to the same the genre
they are different from one another. What most do not understand however, is
that two very similar articles can also be very different.
One can assume
that the two articles based on their titles are similar and belong to the same
genre. That assumption would be correct since both pieces follow the
conventions of the scientific article genre. First off, both articles have
titles that give the audience an idea of what the article is about. Both
articles also have an abstract which gives of a brief description of what is
inside the article, essentially a pre-introduction. The articles also have
introductions which introduces the topic and experiment as well as the purpose
of doing the experiment. Both pieces also have section which describe the
methods they used while performing the experiment. Both pieces then give the
results of the experiment and end with a conclusion that sums up the paper and experiment.
Another similarity between the two is that both follow a similar structure with
starting with an abstract, followed by an introduction, then there is a method
and implementation section, followed by the results and ending with a
conclusion. Both articles have the same
purpose which is to inform their audiences about their topic. The tone of the
pieces is professional and informative. The pieces also have a similar page
where the references and cited works are listed.
While the articles
have their similarities they also have dissimilarities which sets the two
pieces apart. For example, the scholarly piece gives diagrams and tables while
still in the introduction. The SCIgen piece on the other hand does not provide diagrams
until the methods section. Another difference is that the SCIgen piece has
framework, implementation, and evaluation sections while the scholarly piece
does not. The audiences for both pieces are also different the SCIgen piece is
intended for an audience interested in computers, while the scholarly piece is
intended for audience interested in dinosaurs. Another major difference is the
content of the pieces. The SCIgen piece is filled with utter nonsense but it
falls under the scientific article genre because it follows the conventions and
framework. The scholarly piece contains factual information on non-avian
dinosaur tail lengths. The conventions of both pieces are similar but both
pieces contain parts that the other does not. The scholarly piece has a
discussion section but the SCigen piece does not.
One aspect I
believe as one of the most important in the scholarly piece is the writers
explanations and analysis. The writer will make a statement then proceed to
provide support for their statements may it be in the form of quotes from other
sources or numerical figures, then they explain the statement and its support.
This is important because if an audience member is not well versed in the topic
the explanation or the writer’s statements and the information provided can
help an audience member better understand what the writer is attempting to say.
The analysis and support is also very important because depending on how well
the information is analyzed, the article can become more credible and accepted.
Another very important aspect of the scholarly piece is the discussion section of
the piece. This section connects all the information within the article then
talks about it. It also gives answers to question that the audience may have
concerning the information within the piece. It also, presents different ideas
and sources that give support to the writer’s work. This is very important because it makes the
article clearer as well as increasing its credibility.
These two pieces
have similar titles, “Variation in the tail length of non-avian dinosaurs” and “Investigation
of Expert Systems” in that both allow readers to assume their genre. While the
may belong to the same genre both pieces are different as much as they are
alike. Both pieces contain aspects and features that make them alike but also
have things that set them apart. The scholarly piece has aspects that
differentiate themselves from the rest because they do more for the article and
thus are more important. Yet again, two pieces one scholarly and the other
utter nonsense, both with very, very boring titles.



Alright my main man Jonathan! I think you did a great job here man. I love the memes at the beginning and the end, they really speak true to my feelings about school. Another thing is that I like the way that you wrote your PB too. It is very clear and follows a logical flow that is easy to understand. You highlight the similarities and dissimilarities between the two papers pretty well. One piece of criticism though, (not really criticism but whatever) is that I think you should end your paragraphs with a more concluding sentence just to wrap things up a bit. But otherwise, I think you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteTo start, your memes are very funny! Thanks for making me laugh. I think your piece has great points and analysis. You develop your ideas well and even explain which connections and difference you personally find the most important. The start to your piece is strong. You really hook this audience starting out with the two unrelated titles and a question. A reader would want to 1. know how these two random titles connect and 2. know the answer to the question! I think as you continue on in your piece you could use more variety in your word choice and sentence structure. I found you utilizing the words piece, both, also quite often. Starting too many sentences with, “Both articles have…” can leave a reader bored. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThe memes are a great touch! Your analysis was very easy to follow and was also very through due to your expansion on each topic. It caught my attention fro the very beginning and it definetly kept the whole way through. I would say that your syntax needs a little bit more variety, but overall I really enjoyed your piece from start to finish, it had attention-grabbing beginning and plenty of details to keep it interesting. Gret jo!
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